Tears, Tears, Tears, Tears,
All over again.
Hurt, Hurt, Hurt, Hurt,
Once again.
Emotions, Emotions, Emotions, Emotions,
Rolling in my heart.
Relations, Relations, Relations, Relations,
Torned Apart.
Cry, Cry, Cry, Cry,
Becuase you are true and agile.
Try, Try, Try, Try,
Not to be in the manipulative jungle.
Strong, Strong, Strong, Strong,
Become to face and listen all words.
Keep, Keep, keep, keep,
With you the truth's sword.
Expect, Expect, Expect, Expect,
Nothing from anyone.
Give, Give, Give, Give,
if you want to everyone.
Stay, Stay, Stay, Stay,
away from the bad world.
Be, Be, Be, Be,
In your created loving world.
Change, Change, Change, Change,
not for any one.
Leave, Leave, Leave, Leave,
all your good marks on everyone.
completely dedicated to the women who survived the bhopal gas tragedy
ReplyDeletedi!....the poem is excellent...but
ReplyDeletefew lines needs correction for perfect rhyming....just a suggestion..!!!
"try, try....( after this the next line is not in perfect rhyming with the above line..)...just think something more perfect..!!
"keep keep....with u the TRUTH sword..
"give give....love to everyone..or..what u want from everyone...!!
thnx Urvashi....... gud to see ur comments and will look at this. but i was actually not thinking about rhyming all i wrote what came in my mind at that time. but yes i am happy to see ur genuine comments and will work on this for sure. I will looking forward for some more of this ......... thnx dear again :)
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